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Something I've been working on to jot down ideas before I forget them.
Maybe I'll post it on the ASB board one day, but its less alt-history than original stuff.

Presenting the Holy Kingdom of Mekwasakah, 1980 A.D. Map is supposed to be used for low-to-no clearance mapping needs by the Canadian Army.

And yes, that circle in the north is magic. Literally.

Edit: I had to scale the thing down by 50% due to size limitations. And now the city names are unreadable.
Also if someone could give advice on guidelines when adding region names to a map, that would be very helpful. (What font, what size, any tips)

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Something I've been working on to jot down ideas before I forget them.
Maybe I'll post it on the ASB board one day, but its less alt-history than original stuff.

Presenting the Holy Kingdom of Mekwasakah, 1980 A.D. Map is supposed to be used for low-to-no clearance mapping needs by the Canadian Army.

And yes, that circle in the north is magic. Literally.

Edit: I had to scale the thing down by 50% due to size limitations. And now the city names are unreadable.
Also if someone could give advice on guidelines when adding region names to a map, that would be very helpful. (What font, what size, any tips)

Is this supposed to be on earth or somewhere else? I assume due to the native-esque names that it's supposed to be somewhere in Canada that has existed for as long as anybody remembers. When was it discovered?
 
No, no, Caelum is the name for the orbital space colonies as an independent state. From the Latin word for "Sky".
Uranus and Neptune are uncolonised, though there are robotic stations there.

Oh, whoops :p
"Caelum" is the Latin name of Uranus, so that's why I thought.
 
Is this supposed to be on earth or somewhere else? I assume due to the native-esque names that it's supposed to be somewhere in Canada that has existed for as long as anybody remembers. When was it discovered?

Basically there exists a world (my current iteration name is "Fantasia") where magic exists, like a fantasy world with a few twists. It can be connected to our world with very finicky portals. The thing is that during 1640, the ley lines deactivated completely, cutting all transportation between worlds. It was especially bad in the Western hemisphere. The ley lines only came back into full force in 1960.

Mekwasakah was originally a colony of Atlantis (kinda on and off during the 11th Century due to its remoteness), this is reflected as the language of the royal court is still Atlantean-Phoenician. However the vast majority of its population consists of descendants of refugees from European Fantasia, which saw various wars, from Christian conquests and even an extension of WWII on the continent. The lower classes speak a variant of French. The indigenous inhabitants are around 20% of the population, Cree mostly.

Mekwasakah is adjacent via portal to Quebec. Quebec and Canada in this setting are butterflied to have a much larger population than OTL, and French isn't implemented as a official language on the federal level (recognized but not implemented). This is a big plot point. My story starts in 1980. When the pro-independence Parti Patriote-Democratique du Quebec win a referendum... who gets to control access to Mekwasakah?

This is all basically a world building exercise for something I hope to write in the future. Its a pretty promising idea, but it might be damn difficult to pull off given the various sensitive issues I cover.

I'll give you a excerpt from the 11-A Briefing Dossier I've written.

1.1 Context

In April of 1960, the RCMP became aware of reports of strangely clothed persons speaking accented French within the greater Montreal area. The Paranormal Rapid Response Team was mobilized and was able to suppress information before it was leaked to the public. Following a confirmation of ley line reactivation, a contact delegation was formed from specially trained personnel and diplomatic relations with the Holy Kingdom of Mekwasakah were reestablished.

Initial contact led to a trade agreement allowing for the exchange of minerals, oil, and forestry products for manufactures, medicine, agricultural products, technology, and expertise. As a result of trade, the population of Mekwasakah more than doubled between 1960 to the present and the economy grew by an estimated 420%. The growth led to the creation of a middle class where none existed before, and the introduction of a formal industrial sector. Canada’s contributions at this point were strictly limited to material trade, infrastructure construction, medical and humanitarian aid, cultural exchanges, research and advisory roles.

During late 1960s, a steep increase in Soviet bomber overflights and an armed confrontation in June 1969 with the Soviet Kotlin-class destroyer Skromnyy led the Mekwasakan government to seek a military pact with Canada. As part of the Sonewa Joint Defense Treaty, Canada agreed to maintain a military force of 7,000 personnel and provide air and sea defense within the Holy Kingdom of Mekwasakah. An agreement was reached with the United States of America and the Atlantean Confederacy regarding the defense of the Mekwasakan EEZ. A separate logistical and training agreement was reached with the United Kingdom and France.

1.1 Mission Statement

To improve the lives of Mekwasakan citizens, and to defend the sovereignty and freedom of the Holy Kingdom of Mekwasakah on behalf of the people of Canada.
I'll touch up on my stuff and post more if I have time.
 
Im having trouble. In the blue out lined state, should i do vertical or horizontal border for a analogous Oklahoma/Sequoya split in this indian territory?
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Nice.

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As I already mentioned a while back, I noticed that the Polish-Bolshevik war of 1919-1920 is only used for PoDs which make the Bolsheviks win a total victory. This could not be tolerated, so I decided to start working on a timeline where, instead of the Bolsheviks, it is the Poles and their allies who do better.

This map is based on the ideas Piłsudski originally had before reality intervened. It seemed to require a bit too many things going just right to feel plausible enough to me, so the final version will differ in several points (you'll see which ones eventually). But the slightly utopian original version deserved some sort of map, so here is a quick one.

What happens?

-The 1919 coup in Lithuania succeeds and a pro-Polish government emerges. This allows Piłsudski to set up a loose Lithuanian Federation consisting of Baltic, Polish and Belarusian segments.

-In OTL, the French attempted to mediate between the Poles and West Ukrainians in 1919, proposing roughly the same border as appears on this map. Poland was inclined to accept, but the West Ukrainians were not. ITTL they realize that they can't win and also agree. West Ukraine eventually merges with Petlura's Ukraine, so at the beginning of 1920 Ukraine is stronger and more cohesive than in OTL.

-The Bolshevik counteroffensive against Denikin does better, and in the spring of 1920 the Reds are in Crimea, poised for a final strike against the Whites. This makes it harder for them to react to the Polish-Ukrainian Kiev Offensive.

-The stronger Ukrainians do somewhat better at setting up a working government in Kiev, and managed to recruit some additional forces in Kiev.

-All this allows the Poles and Ukrainians to defeat the Bolshevik counteroffensive against Kiev. Meanwhile, the presence of Baltic Lithuanian forces in the north is enough to halt Tukachevsky's offensive somewhere around Minsk.

-The Poles and Ukrainians launch a new offensive to the southeast of Kiev. Stalin, in charge of the Red Army in Ukraine, refuses to authorize another withdrawal, which leads to another defeat.

-Lenin and Trotsky decide that this defeat makes regaining Ukraine extremely hard, and decide to end the war to consolidate their rule in Russia. Stalin is blamed for making victory in Ukraine impossible, and is purged.

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Narodist Russia Part 3

It has been just a few years since our last update, and already a drastic change has taken place. The United States has become increasingly unstable as economic recession has hit it hard due to previous wars reaking devastating impacts on their economy. Without the reforms of people like Roosevelt and the like, the government went the other way and became more oppressive in nature in response to the cruel realities surrounding them. This led to the creation and radicalisation of opposition from all across the political spectrum, and it was only a matter of time before things would begin to boil over. fears truly began to arise as rumours spread in Europe about both of the far-lefts most radical factions starting to find common ground for the first time in years. This could only mean bad things in the eyes of the old Entente and MittelEuropa. The two conservative alliances were still resentful towards one another for various reasons, but issues that were arising out of their borders were beginning to trigger a secret alliance to counteract the Far Left. The Far Right was mostly left on its own, as many of them weren’t powerful enough to really have that much of an impact, though the Tangs of China were creating a practical civil war for all intents and purposes. Though even that in China was normal compared to what happened next.

On the 1st of September 1939, as the US president Arthur Vandenberg was making preparations for a speech announcing a new economic plan which would prevent America from facing further woes, in front of a protesting crowd, he was assassinated by an anarchist gunman. The vice president was also injured in this disaster, and the crowds soon started to move and storm the white house, where they quickly started fighting one another. Soon, multiple groups started declaring for the US presidency, while the army seized the capital and declared martial law, which was the last straw in an increasingly authoritarian and corrupt government. The people rose against this military regime, but were ultimately divided. A new American Civil War had begun. Unlike the previous one, this had several sides, including secessionists of competing varieties. Texas, California, Hawaii and even Utah made a shot at independence, as they felt the government’s failure to provide for its people, as well as the extremism of many of the rebel factions would be too much to bare. The deep south was a particular battleground, as right-wing extremists, consisting of a mixture of religious fundamentalists such as the Ku-Klux Klan, white supremacists, ultra-nationalists (this world’s equivalent of fascists, though without the socialistic origins) and neo-confederates united under the ‘American Patriot Federation’ due to the nature of the alliances.

Opposing these were two forms of populist, the Moscow backed ‘Popular Syndicates of America’ which was primarily radical, and the more moderate and nationalistic Popular Union. Yet another rebellious group is ‘New Africa’, a radicalised African-American resistance group who fights for black rights across the entire USA, and perhaps the establishment of a homeland for Black Americans. Up in the north, the military government had to deal with a primarily liberal protest government as well as the ‘Collectivised Revolutionary Republic of America’, who is more syndicalist-influenced than Madrid would like, but better than nothing. Finally, a black army of anarchists has risen up as well to establish free territories instead of a state, and of course there are a few warlords who are only after themselves. The civil war set the world ablaze as governments started backing different factions and seizing areas. The British Empire occupied Alaska and various islands for safekeeping reasons, while backing the libertarian Free States. Soon, the populists and the communists both began to make ground and in February, 1940, officially made an alliance to remove all the other factions from American soil before ‘resolving the matters of the post-revolutionary world’. This scared the other factions, except for the International and the Front, who upped their financial aid. The Kaiser in Berlin demanded to end this immediately, but the Muscovites refused plainly, as their forces were rapidly integrating the Ukraine and Baltics, and backed revolutionaries were making progress in Poland and Transcaucasia too. Similarly, France and Britain became concerned about the Spanish backing in both America and Venezuala, as well as hostile gestures towards the National state. Again, requests to withdraw were refused. Germany and Britain declared war on the Popular Union and Workers Republic respectively, and so the Great Socialist war began, an alliance between two powerful conservative blocks and two powerful socialist ones as well. The Conservative block soon underestimated the power of the revolutionaries, who spread like wildfire across the Balkans, southern America and even Colonial Africa.

A side theatre soon emerged in Brazil as the Syndicate’s brutality grew to unbearable levels, as eventually millions were massacred in the forests or starved off living off those lands, which ironically were ravaged by the overcrowded people stripping it of food. Like our world’s Khmer Rouge, the regime was tearing itself apart, but on a much bigger scale and without a foreign power to invade for it-the population had dropped by more than a third by 1939 from its 1933 number, and the and it was getting even lower. A large rebellion along the coasts was crushed, but another and another rose up in its place, while the government in exile from the islands chipped in, leading to the Second Brazilian Civil War, as the increasingly deranged and fanatical Syndicate fought on in the forests, enslaving its local peoples and performing outright genocide on the natives. This was fought separately from the rst of the conflict, but has been added into it anyway due to the nature of the basic ideology, even if the Front had long disowned Brazil’s extremism. How long this war, or the alliances, would last is anyone’s guess at this point. But an amassing of Turanic troops among the Arabian border is getting people’s concern, especially as the Arabians have themselves wanted to take advantage of Turanic weakness in regards to the oppressed Arabs of the Levant and Palestine. Even more startlingly, the Front-International alliance is becoming shakier by the day…

A similar war raged in Asia, as the powerful Tang dynasty began to seriously challenge the Nationalists for control of the country, and started launching raids against the neutral Tibetans as well. Japan although not on the best terms with either, send limited aid to the nationalists, as although they were revanchists, the Tang would doubtlessly be even more so, thus leading to a ‘lesser of two evils’ philosophy developing with regards to the region. With Britain preoccupied with the wars in America and Europe, the Japanese started to enter on the side of the Nationalists, wanting to help them transition into democracy once the war is over. The Japanese are also interested in creating a situation unfavourable for Ulanbataar, who are trying to create a lobby in the nationalists that favours Populism, which admittedly is very popular in the locals. Japan plans to prepare its move against the Russians whenever the chance crops up to them.
The map shows the situation at the beginning of January 1941, while the war is in full swing, and before the big twists.


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BTW, an annotated model will appear sooner or later.
 
Nice.

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As I already mentioned a while back, I noticed that the Polish-Bolshevik war of 1919-1920 is only used for PoDs which make the Bolsheviks win a total victory. This could not be tolerated, so I decided to start working on a timeline where, instead of the Bolsheviks, it is the Poles and their allies who do better.

This map is based on the ideas Piłsudski originally had before reality intervened. It seemed to require a bit too many things going just right to feel plausible enough to me, so the final version will differ in several points (you'll see which ones eventually). But the slightly utopian original version deserved some sort of map, so here is a quick one.

What happens?

-The 1919 coup in Lithuania succeeds and a pro-Polish government emerges. This allows Piłsudski to set up a loose Lithuanian Federation consisting of Baltic, Polish and Belarusian segments.

-In OTL, the French attempted to mediate between the Poles and West Ukrainians in 1919, proposing roughly the same border as appears on this map. Poland was inclined to accept, but the West Ukrainians were not. ITTL they realize that they can't win and also agree. West Ukraine eventually merges with Petlura's Ukraine, so at the beginning of 1920 Ukraine is stronger and more cohesive than in OTL.

-The Bolshevik counteroffensive against Denikin does better, and in the spring of 1920 the Reds are in Crimea, poised for a final strike against the Whites. This makes it harder for them to react to the Polish-Ukrainian Kiev Offensive.

-The stronger Ukrainians do somewhat better at setting up a working government in Kiev, and managed to recruit some additional forces in Kiev.

-All this allows the Poles and Ukrainians to defeat the Bolshevik counteroffensive against Kiev. Meanwhile, the presence of Baltic Lithuanian forces in the north is enough to halt Tukachevsky's offensive somewhere around Minsk.

-The Poles and Ukrainians launch a new offensive to the southeast of Kiev. Stalin, in charge of the Red Army in Ukraine, refuses to authorize another withdrawal, which leads to another defeat.

-Lenin and Trotsky decide that this defeat makes regaining Ukraine extremely hard, and decide to end the war to consolidate their rule in Russia. Stalin is blamed for making victory in Ukraine impossible, and is purged.

So are these countries now in a loose federation or something? Because if fully sovereign states Polish nationalists are going to want to hang Pilduski from a tree... :)
 

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It's done!

I call it TL 797, because 1797 was the last year before the POD in 1798. The year right now is 1923 AD.

Basically, the Franco-American War becomes a more involved deal. The peace treaty involves America paying Napoleon a hefty fee in exchange for a turnover of French holdings in the Americas. A shorter, more successful war means more popular support for the Federalists, who remain to this day the dominant party in American politics. With bipartisan support for intervention and a tradition of imperialism since the birth of the nation, America now stretches across the world.

As for the rest, it's mostly butterflies. Germany's wars with Austria were nastier, and Russia opportunistically entered in one of them (note that Russia has Galicia-Lodomeria). Germany and Russia are ideological and geopolitical friends: both of them are conservative monarchies with an interest in keeping Poland down. They also both possess anti-British imperial interests.

The Entente itself is mostly smaller empires and countries with anti-German interests in the English sphere of influence. America, under the Federalists, has always been a friend to Britain in ATL.

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Nicely done: I spot a couple convergent borders but nothing too bad. Need a label for the Two Sicilies: given their likely poor relations with Italy and conservative traditions, they'd probably be in there with the Germans and Russians.

I suspect China will remain neutral only until a good opportunity to stab Russia in the back arises.

Shouldn't Haiti be a territory rather than a state? Unless the US is a lot less racist than OTL.

(Speaking of which, was there a *Civil war?)
 
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